Three things I know to be true
Three things I know
to be trueIntroduction The three things I know to be true are Manchester
city, phone game, and music. I will tell about these three things why I like
them how, when, and where. I like Manchester city .this is because they
are famous and food at soccer. They were not famous before but a rich person
bought Manchester city’s team. Manchester city then bought good players. This
soccer team won the league and FA cup before. This team became really famous. I
also like the players too. There is Zdecko, Tevez, Silva, Kompany, Toure and
other good players in Manchester city team. My love for Manchester city will
never change. I got into the Manchester city fan café.
Second, I like phone games. You might think
that phone games are bad but some of them are good. The phone games I play are
good for you. It is good because it is good for your brain. Also, It is an
online game so we cam chit chat with other people. Then we can make new
friends. I already made five friends from this game. I like the game not
because only the game is fun. I like it because we can make new friends. This game
is the best one I played. The game name is special force. Third, I like music. I like pay phone, glad
you came, call me baby, moves like jagger. The singers ar5 Maroon 5, The wanted
and other singers. I like music that is fast and fun. I listen to the music
when I sleep and on the subway. If I listen to the music it makes me dance and
have fun. Finally, I like Manchester city, phone games, and music. I am sad
that I cannot see Manchester city and play phone games because of the camp. I will
always like these three things.
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