Kony bye bye!!! Joseph Kony who
is a terrible, horrible and bad man who kidnaps children. What do they do with children?
They kill them or make them a soldier. Jason Russell went to Uganda in 2003 and
he met a child name Jacob. His life was in horror. He and his friends were
running away from Kony every day. His brother was kidnapped and killed by Kony.
He said he would rather die. Kony was a foe to children. Jason Russell saw this
terror and wanted to stop and help the problem so they went to United States of
America. They went into the white house. They told everything about Kony but United
States government could not accept this. They decided to make kony famous they
were going to make kony famous to catch him. Now this is the problem. Making kony
famous or not. For this problem I say that we have to make kony famous. The LRA
group and kony are bad and we have to stop. The U.S. government did not accept
the problem because nobody knew who kony was. So we need to make kony famous in
2012. So he can be stopped. We know that kony is bad so we have to catch him
and make him apologize. To catch him we have to make kony famous and needs
people’s interests. If we do not have people’s interests and do not hear their voice
it will be hard to catch Kony. Also, if we do
not make Kony famous, we can’t catch him. If you see in the video at the top,
the U.S. government did not help us but when kony got famous the government helped
catching Kony. We need people who have influencing power to help. However some people say that we have to catch him quietly because
there is kony’s right of privacy. But think! ! Guys Kony killed many people so
he does not have right to secure his privacy. He already invasioned kids life and
ordered them. Kony told them to kill his parents. It is not okay to violate
kids. So I say we should make him famous. Finally, I actually want to
know the reason why we can’t make Kony famous. He has done so many viciousness
things. If we do not make this evil guy famous we can not catch Kony. It is
100% right thing to make Kony famous. There is no reason to stop making him
famous. I strongly agree at making
kony famous. It is a ridiculous and foolish thing if we do not make kony
popular. I claim that we should make kony famous. Because he has no right to
argue and it is 100% right making kony popular. Now as you heard this terrible
story you know that we should stop him. We need your help. I will not force you
but we have to help Uganda’s children. We know that Kony is bad!!
This is a good try at an agrumentative essay. you make some good points. You need to work on the structure of your essay with a clear introduction, body and conclusion as discussed in class.
Write in paragraphs with spaces between each one. You also should include pictures and the Kony 2012 video for the reader.
This is a good try at an agrumentative essay. you make some good points. You need to work on the structure of your essay with a clear introduction, body and conclusion as discussed in class.
ReplyDeleteWrite in paragraphs with spaces between each one. You also should include pictures and the Kony 2012 video for the reader.
Good luck next time.